Comments : Three Words Too Late

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad yet beautiful! Excellent job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Yeah, i remember reading this a long time ago... You still got me stunned. I love it! .. even thought its kinda sad. You did an amazing job at this. the rhyme... the flow.. amazing! I didn't find anything wrong. Simply amazing.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5, Wow. I know why it became a chain letter on myspace. It has so much emotions and such a carried high sensation that they both loved eachother but they never knew how much the other one loved the other one. Not making sense but yeah. This is quite a sad poem!. Keep up the great work!!.

  • 13 years ago

    by Rona

    I thought that was just amazing! I certainly felt the sadness in this poem. It made me realize how not to do things without thinking it through or we may pay the price afterwards. I loved it! Just a few things I thought I should point out:

    She dialed his number
    He answered "Hello" [

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Tragically very sad, but very well written

  • 13 years ago

    by Rona

    Ack! My comment was cut off!

    Well, as I was saying, I think you should put quotation marks there since he's talking.
    And you made a little typo with the title. "Three Words *To* (Too) Late" Well, that's it =)

    Overall, I thought this was a GREAT poem!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    I love this poem. I remember reading it last year and i liked it so much I saved it. so i have your original one if you would like it. But honestly both are really good. good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Wow, i'm actually crying here! i cant believe that i never read this before! and i dunno how the original was, but this one is great!

    Narc xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Faith Davis

    This sounds like me and a friend but we didnt die. When i heard this i started to cry and kno people will kno wat i feel like inside

  • 13 years ago

    by ALEX

    I remember seeing this on other sites, thinking what a great poem it is. Glad i can finally congratulate the author! This is an amazing poem.
    5/5
    ♥Parker

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephy

    Simply beautiful. I absoluetly adore it. this one and the original.
    -xxx-

  • 13 years ago

    by Toni

    Absolutely beautiful hun, hope you're ok havent been on here in a while xxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by x in love x

    I think all ure poems and quotes are really good, and im relieved that im not the only one feelin like this. thanx
    hope ure ok x

  • 13 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this was so sad...it was a great write your amazing!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Aww, I love this poem! I wanna cry LOL! It's awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . . you're awesome :0)!
    *Just Lisa*

  • 13 years ago

    by XxPainfulDeathxX

    Wow this was an amazing poem it was the first time i read it and i loved it!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Birgit

    Oh My Gosh! This is so beautiful. Keep up the good writing!

    xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by For The Heart I Once Had

    Beautiful poem. Good work. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by jessica warrick

    This one made me cry...no joke..i felt a tear drop.

  • 12 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Oh my god, this is immensely moving, an absolutely BRILLIANT poem, one of the best I have ever had the joy of reading, trulky this is a fantastic piece of work, touching, strong, and it calls to a part that exists inside each one of us. I truly love it. Please, write more!

    Drew x