Yeah, i remember reading this a long time ago... You still got me stunned. I love it! .. even thought its kinda sad. You did an amazing job at this. the rhyme... the flow.. amazing! I didn't find anything wrong. Simply amazing.
5/5, Wow. I know why it became a chain letter on myspace. It has so much emotions and such a carried high sensation that they both loved eachother but they never knew how much the other one loved the other one. Not making sense but yeah. This is quite a sad poem!. Keep up the great work!!.
I thought that was just amazing! I certainly felt the sadness in this poem. It made me realize how not to do things without thinking it through or we may pay the price afterwards. I loved it! Just a few things I thought I should point out:
Oh my god, this is immensely moving, an absolutely BRILLIANT poem, one of the best I have ever had the joy of reading, trulky this is a fantastic piece of work, touching, strong, and it calls to a part that exists inside each one of us. I truly love it. Please, write more!