Remember...

by creasy   Mar 1, 2005


Remember when we used to talk,
we used to stay up all night;
Talked about anything,
and sometimes had a fight.

Remember all those long chats,
we used to put each other to sleep;
had conversations about anything,
and sometimes ones that were deep.

Remember how we talked,
for long hours straight;
And just because of you,
I stayed up late.

Remember when we used to talk,
always one on one;
We sometimes teased each other,
but we still had a lot of fun.

Remember the time,
when we tried to find things out;
We got mad at each other,
and almost started to shout.

Remember how we always,
made fun of each other;
And I got mad when you said,
you were like my big brother.

Remember we’d always,
take forever to leave;
And when we were gone,
we would wait for a message to receive.

Remember when we used to compete,
against the best songs;
We had so much fun then,
so what went wrong?

Thinking back we had some good times,
But now you don’t want to talk,
And I’m gonna miss all the things we left behind.

Not sure if its finished yet, I think I have to add some more.
~*~please comment and tell me what you think.~*~ thanks!

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  • 19 years ago

    by kaysha

    Very cute poem! wondrful rythem... keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    i like it! if i remember i'll definately come back to see if you ended up adding more! either way it's a good poem:)
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Nice job..well written! 5/5 keep it up
    -J-

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    thanks heather..yeah you understand it correctly..i actually put it in there first but i wasnt sure if it was right..thanks!! :) take care. god bless..

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    I think that was a good ending...hmm perhaps you could stick it in broken friendships if I understand the poem correctly? great work however-5

    God Bless
    Love Heather.