Dealing with my mind

by Ally xo   Mar 5, 2005


Now things are weird
i wonder for countless days
who am i
why am i here

right, you think your powerful
but your really not
there is just that someone
who will break your heart

it is not only guys
but those girls
when i mean those
i mean the bit*hy ones

they talk about you and make you want to die
even want to cry
all i have is the pain
i do not want to seek it

but it comes for me
like a bullet
and when it hits you
your mesmerized

i do not want to hurt myself
but it is to really hard to tell you
how i truly feel
this poem helps alot

* i guess i will just have to deal *

if you could would you just take the time and write a comment it would really mean allot to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I saw your name and thought about reading another one of your poems.This one is truly sensational.Really good writing.

    Your friend
    Robert Flores aka Switchblade

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    all i have is the pain
    i do not want to seek it
    **try changing it to
    all i have is the pain
    i do not seek it **
    but its an awesomely written POem
    loved it
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Kisa

    I think it would have been more effective if it ryhmed, not bad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    this is a really good poem, keep it up! please comment back :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Hey! Omg we haven't talked in forever. This is a really good poem. No my friend-ryan- didn't die. But he leaves for like Iraq soon and Im really sad. Well email me k? Tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com!
    ~Much Love~
    Jordan-Paige

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