Simple but effective (repost)

by Ally xo   Aug 2, 2005


Betrayed and broken,
Mistreated and misused.
Mentally and emotionally,
Beaten and abused.

Left alone without a thought,
With nothing to do but cry.
And crawl back inside myself,
To watch myself slowly die

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  • 15 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Short poem but it didn't need to be long to get the emotion in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Really effective and deep. Good choice of words. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by That Crazy Guy Chris

    Yes...very deep.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, less really is more. This is a short poem, but it's very deep. Definite 5/5.

    Thanks for the comments, it's means a lot! =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by browneyedbabe2244

    I really like it, its simple but menas a lot, thanks 4 commenting my poem

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