Our World

by Victoria   Mar 13, 2005


A beautiful world is all around
I’m so glad that I have found
My piece of mind to help me see
How glorious this world can be

From the smallest creature to the cities we have built
It’s like a rainbow of colours being spilt
So much life and joy in one place
It’s a feeling of heavens grace

Who needs prophecies telling us about destruction?
When our life helps this world function
If life was not alive
Our beautiful planet would not thrive

So lets bask in the golden light we share
Lets us feel its warmth everywhere

*this is one of my happier poems, thanks for reading

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I loved this just as I loved your other
    poems. this is brilliant. what other thing can I say?
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Diego Moreno

    hey gret poem....awesome i love it...u know, i haven't notice untill now but, this poem is kinda the same as mine, "Questions of life" i think so....well later and take care girl....

    hollabackgirl

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Hey, thanks for the comment. It meant a lot.

    Great poem hun. You wrote it very well. :-)

    God bless! <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Excellent job and beautifully written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ excellent poem victoria, amazing write, write on :)
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

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