From You

by Kalika   Mar 22, 2005


Tonight is the night,
My spirit won't fall.
Alone again I cry,
Surrounded by the wall.

Try to break free,
But you hold me down.
I thrash and I scream,
As I slowly drown.

Drown in the sorrow,
The hate, and the guilt
Hiding forever,
Behind this mask I built.

Tonight I will dance,
Dance free from your grasp.
Nothing can hold me back,
Free from you at last.

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Thats really good 5.5 awsome job thanks so much for r/c on my poem and the ed was part of anther word and i think spell check killed it lol

    thanks again

    ~natalie

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    You are very talented
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    wow.. that was really good!! i've felt that way many times before!! your a really good writer!! bye bye EJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    As always, very nice.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Very good poem! I agree with tEyS, That was my favorite part as well. Stay positive!
    Take care and God bless!