How He Feels

by Heather M Craig   Mar 24, 2005


The way he treats you
is nothing of a friend,
nullifies the created image
proceeds occur again.

The words hurt deep down
into a place he can't visualize,
to self absorbed with lack of notice
of the collecting pain in your eyes.

Everything you stood for
he pushed you to the fall,
memories tense your mind
of every moment you can recall.

Looking for change in secrecy
with the hidden truth expound,
missing latter days of friendship
of the one who's never around.

Heather M Craig

written for a friend, Jody ... his friend Steven uses him to get with his sister and he don't have the courage to tell his "best friend" how he feels so this poem is to show Steven what Jody couldn't say.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    nice and thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Wow Heather that was so nice!!! Tell him to stop being so damn sacrey!!!! 5/5 .............Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    yo go ahead grl......luv ya brit

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    What a beautiful piece to write for someone an open and heartfelt dedication - you're such a sweetheart hun!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    excellent poem heather / i appreciable your effort / keep writing

    5/5. take care, always believe in love.

    love, amit ~