I represent all and nothing

by Elynnka   Mar 24, 2005


I am like a thought, undead,
I represent the words unsaid
I am the wound that has always bled.
I am the joy you have never felt,
The pain you have always dealt,
The ice that has never melt
Off your broken heart.
I am dead and torn apart
I am your end and the start
Of a new revolution,
The only one looking for a solution,
The one lost in an illusion...
I am all
And nothing more
I am something you abhor...

this is not very good...please tell me what you think, cause i am not sure if it is good or not, thx.

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Yes it is good, I think its wonderful. Nicely written and good expression. Thanks for commenting on so many of my poems. It means alot to me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem, i like it!