by Carmen Mar 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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This pain inside me won't go away, |
by Kalika
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Another poem I can relate to, great job....I relate so well to your poems, and I really enjoy reading them...another 5..... |
by ScarletHaze
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wow that was ace! xxxxxxxxxxxx |
by Brookeღ
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Amazing poem! The rhyming was great! Good emotion! Take Care! Brooke |
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I liked it alot but try change it near the end a little bit because to me it sounds the rhyming is a little forced.. I gave it a 4 |
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Good work!! Amazing poem! |