Journey

by Daniel Fink   Mar 27, 2005


Now I walk through the valley of the shadow of death,
It doesn't’t fear me enough to hold my breath,
Cause the commandments I follow like the law,
Not one broken not one at all,
You gave your blood for my sins,
They stuck you with spikes like safety pins,
My love for you is so deep,
Now when your not around I wanna weep,
You always made my heart take flight,
When I walk with you every thing is alright,
You could cure the world with your smile,
Without your beloved smile the world would just defile,
I thank you for what you did for me,
I will always think of you as I make my journey through the sea,
Now as I battle life I will never flea,
This is the end but remember,
Now I know your love is with me,
No matter what happens in life’s journey

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Good poem Thanx for the comments on my poem appreciate it. I haven't been writing that long so it's hard for me to give advice. The only thing I noticed with some of ur others is the rhymes needed some work but don't worry I have a time with that myself! Keep writing and I will keep reading ur poems! Take Care!

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