Hater poets

by Daniel Fink   Apr 1, 2005


All these other poets think i suck,
You know what i don't even give a f**k,
All these hater poets can go to hell,
Sh*t right now you better put me in jail,
Cause if i ever see one of theses poets on the street,
I'll be the scariest man they'll meet,
Sh*t I'll pull my gun out to show them my skill,
Bang bang bang I will see there blood spill,
Cause of all the sh*t they talk to me,
Every one of them death will see,
All you hater poets better run,
Cause as soon as i pull out my gun I will have some fun,
Well this is the end of this great poem,
All the hater poets i will show'em,
All you better not mess with me,
I'll be the scariest man you ever see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Every1 has der own style of writin i don't thynk any1 has da rite 2 say shyt abot any1 elses poetry. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Gahahahah babe this is a very angry poem!!! I liked it though, because you're standing up for yourself. and that shows strength especially through what you wrote. Dont listen to anyone else okay? If you enjoy writing, if you enjoy poetry, then dont let ANYTHING stand in your way.
    =]

  • 18 years ago

    by chelsea

    that was a good poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by BreatheXnoXMore

    Were people actually dissing your poems? That's really messed up... I thought it was great... The only thing you need to make a good poem is heartfelt emotion. As long as it comes from you, it's wonderful. Good luck with Eve Angel!

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Cool poem, good read. I think your writing is raw and on the edge...I have checked out some of your other stuff, I like your style. I agree with Kika, shrug it off.

    You should read some of my earlier stuff, I write what I feel fanstasy mostly but always on the edge...If we cannot express ourselves through our words then how else can we, poerty like art is how other poeple percieve it to be...But its always safe, it is at the end of the day words!!!

    Keep up the good work...Check out my latest piece 'secret love' and when you have time check out some of my earlier stuff I would be interested in your opinion.

    Kind regards
    Hayley

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