TURN OF FATE!!!

by Haleigh   Mar 28, 2005


I can't believe this turn of fate,
Just last week I was crying myself to sleep,
My life I thought forever I'd hate,
I guess you could say I took a pretty big leap,
Now I can't even cry if I tried,
I'm so happy I found you,
Never again will I want to die,
Just one night and I knew you were true,
Didn't make a pass or try to get some ass,
Loving you is oh so new,
So perfect together the two of us are,
Wish I had found you earlier to erase my scars,
My hearts no longer broken,
Words rarely spoken,
Baby you fixed everything and for this I LOVE YOU

please comment and/or rate this poem it took a lot out of me. I'll return the favor and rate on your poems too...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Wow, you certainly know how to write! keep up the awesome job! this one was very good and very interesing!! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This is a good poem, yet it lacks that special something...It is quite a clichè, but still well written...

    some of the rhymes seems quite forced, which brings it down, and it doesn't have a natural flow...

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    another really good... No AWSOME poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    another really good... No AWSOME poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Full of happiness! You expressed your emotions very well! Take Care! Brooke~