Hey my inner Angel

by Amba   Mar 29, 2005


Hey my inner Angel
Why have you turned you’re back?
Are the cuts that deep that they hurt you too?
Or is it our theory on life that we both seem to lack?

So my poor little Angel why don't you Fly away?
Leave my Life, your only bringing us both down even more
But your wings have been clipped and they too are drowning in blood
They pull you down as you try to leave, and we both hit the floor

I wish for you my little angel, that we both get strong
i hate to see you on the floor crying, i know that i have done all wrong
I will clean you wings, and fix them, And hope the demon leaves
But in front of me is where he stands, with the knife, he starts to tease

Oh my gosh my little angel, look what i have done
The mess i have gotten us both in, we must become one
We’ll form together, if we do this we just might make it through the night
The bleeding will stop, The scars will go, we must put up the fight

Hey my inner Angel, I think we made it through
The nasty demon has left, and i still have you
I promise the cutting will stop now and i promise i will never again
Because in you my little angel, i have found my bestest friend. .

I did two poems like this but i don't know what one is better so i'll just put the other one up
some other time and see if its better, i don't know. . please rate and comment, the favour is
always returned

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Amba. very well written.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    thanx uz all, but personaly i dont think this one was good aye, thanks anyways

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    omg amba! awesome lots of emotion, and you made it clear what you wanted it to say! keep on rocking hun

    ~Darkness

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem, i like it!