Soul Taker

by Victoria   Mar 29, 2005


Come with me
I will take you away
You will see
How to play
Come to my land
Where your dreams will come true
Take my hand
I have chosen you
Come and you will see
A world without fear
You will always be free
To me you are so dear
Hand in hand you walk with me
Soon you will realise this world is not real
It’s a shame you saw who you wanted me to be
Soon you will no longer be able to feel
Because my land is hell
I take what souls stray
The ones who have been blinded and have fell
They will never see another living day
Humans are so blind
They only see what the wish to see
They are also too kind
That is why they will never feel free

*thanks for reading

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Sooo true and i just loved it, it flowed so well and the words were perfect:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Fear2love

    perfect

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    wow your poem coudnt be any more true. I fully understand the message behind it and you got it across really well.

    great poem! Take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by BlackRose

    this is a good poem... i like the topic and the ryme skeem is gud... keep up the good work and im hoping to hear more soon

    sincerely,
    Blackrose A.K.A. the beauty in death

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent write!