Huny i can relsate to this AMAZINGLY! Its very raw, and truthful, I LOVE IT! Please keep writing

xX MAZ Xx

A saracastic sorry ... So much anger and emotion in this girleh. Well written - loved it!

Lufffuuuls yew -
>Kalah.

Well done i really liked this one because i can relate, this line though
*Thanks for learning me how to hate myself*
I think is suppose to be *Thanks for teaching me how to hate myself*
And then a few small spelling errors with *grate full* it's grateful.
But i loved the poem it was very very good and it flowed really well.
Take care.

ahh strong strong stuff...im liking it

i think it is good to get feelings out it is like putting your blood on paper the poem flowed well in an angry sort of way

Excellent write, shows off anger clearly!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

very strong powerful poem. well done

Jacs
xxx

aww, i really hope this is true. it's such a brilliant poem
you've got a 5 from me for sure
btw thanks for the comments

This poem makes me glad I never knew my dad. WELL WRITEN.

Ohh, I wasn't about my dad, it was for my boyfriend!!! He use yo treat me SO bad!!! =0) lol, sorry you misunderstood it!!!

Very powerful and full of meaning, i love it!
Lmay xXx

Cant believe i missed this poem! How foolish of me. if ur online go on messenger so we can chat pweeze :)

Guess wot? I had a filling today on my tooth so it feels a bit numb :(

The only help I can offer was already said by Maven, so I won't trouble you with that. Another very powerful expressive poem from you, and another "well done" from me.

The flow could use some help, but otherwise it was a pretty good poem, i mean the emotion was just seeping out of it i could feel your anger and hurt. Lots of poeple can relate to what you are saying.
good could be great.
lots of love,
cate

Wow This Poem Showed Very Powerful Strong Emotions Through These Words, You Caught Me Off Gaurd The Title Didn't Seem That The Poem Would Turn Out That Way!! I Love Good Suprises And This Was One Of Them 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

nice job like the others

i think you are brilliant at writing poems.....keep going!!!!!!!

wd

I know it is one of your later poems, but I am glad I read it, because this poem could have been an anthem of my own, and still be 100% true. Thank you so much for you sweet message. You asked if I was okay, and I can't really give you an answer to take. I guess I can say I am at the end of my rope, but I am hanging on with for my life with every single bit of strength I have. I supposed that is not the most uplifting picture, but I am not one to sugar coat things. Thank you for caring, it is nice to know there are some people that still do from time to time. I love your icon, I would steal it from you, but it is not fair to take other people's indiviuality away from them. Bundles of hugs hunni, thank you.

-Tainted Mikochan