Without You

by Gemmie Lou   Apr 6, 2005


When you entered my life,
you became my life.
When you left my life,
you took my reason for life with you.
Now I don't know what to do,
can I go on being me without you?
Life's all weird,
seems out of wack.
I still see you nearly everyday,
hurts so much when you don't acknowledge me in any way.
Now I don't know what to do,
can I go on being me without you?
Maybe one day the hurt will go away,
but seeing you with her I know it wont be today.
I know it'll get better,
and I hope it will happen soon.
Because I don't know if I can go on being me without you?

plz comment on my poems its wot keeps me writing i think id giv up otherwise! xxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by sweetcheeks17

    THIS ONE IS REALLY GOOD....

  • 19 years ago

    by Unrequited

    great poem! very creative...

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    The hurt will finally go away I can relate to this poem! Exellent job! Take Care of ur self and be strong! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    I did write it friom experience yes an writin it helped me wrk out some real rubbish wiv dat lad! Im glad u like it! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    cheers 4 all d really nice comments guys maybe going through all dat shit wiv d lad was wrth 2 av such nice fings sed about me!

    xxx

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