Echoes (a visionless love)

by mayme   Apr 9, 2005


Echoes of a mothers cry
are loudest when spent for her child,
tears like falls that touch the ground
become a river that forever flows.
Her children die one by one
leaving her on her knees
with only a rock to see
telling herself it was meant to be.

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  • 19 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow i really like this one. 5/5

    Mallori

  • 19 years ago

    by MissAlotta

    Thanks for the comment, Love this poem- short and sweet. Nice Job

  • 19 years ago

    by loner 4 lyfe

    Thx for commenting mine! your poems are nice

  • 19 years ago

    by dwight

    Wow, great! That was the first poem on this site that almost brought tears to my eyes. The other poems are good, but being on the verge of crying, woow!
    YOur talented, and your biography well you seem like the people I ahng out with,
    keep your head up!
    dwight

  • 20 years ago

    by jhosy

    Hey , Good poem. Keep up the good work.

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