You were

by ElegantlyWasted   Apr 13, 2005


You were my everything,
The reason i tried.
-Now you are my nothing,
Just the tears that I've cried-

You were my heartbeat,
The smile on my face.
-Now you are worthless,
Just a neurotic, waste of space-

You were my sunshine,
The one holding my hand.
-Now you are leaving,
And i don't understand-

You were my best friend,
The light so i could see.
-Now you are suffering,
And it's all because of me-

You were the screaming,
The calming in my head.
-Now you are choking,
And cutting on your bed-

You were the mascara stains,
That laced my pale skin.
-Now you are drowning,
On the tears you held within-

You were my everything,
The voice in my head.
-Now you are nothing,
But the reason you're dead-

+Ugh not my best. He made me feel happy and pissed off at the same time. Now I'm just ... empty+

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    sigh, i need to start remembering im not freak anymore lol im ~Death's Embrace~...actually nevermind im going back to Freak LOL i change my mind tooooo much
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    hey, thx for rating my poems, and yea im aight thx so much for caring :D and i know a few guys like the one in ur poem haha. i think it was very beautifully written. it got slightly confusing towards the middle where he was all bad and sad..because it begins to seem like you are the sad but then all of a sudden its him....i think it just needs thinking about haha. or maybe im thinking too much. lol. i rele liked this though. 5/5
    ~Freak~

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    this was really great and sad. i really really know exactly how you feel. Take care.
    Lovez ya
    Samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So powerful and emotional, I know the feelings you are going through!!! I feel like this every day...Love this poem, i truely do, something I can relate to!!! hope that you are ok???

    *Lova Sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem, really sad, 5/5 you'll get better. you'll feel filled again.

    PLP~ Lil slam~ hugs & love

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