Thoughts of a Killer

by David Paul   Apr 13, 2005


I feel your skin with the tips of my fingers,
Chills run down your spine as the sensation lingers,
You begin to breath faster when you know what I'm doing,
No ones around now and my true side is showing.

I feel your heart quicken its rhythmic pulse,
By now you know my promises of love are false,
A grin on my face shows I know I'll get my way,
And you wont tell anyone for you will never again see day.

I feel the bones in your neck begin to break,
I wanted it real but all that I got was fake,
If I can't have it then no one else will,
My adrenalin pumps after my first kill.

I feel the wind as I walk away from what I hid,
The creatures will feast as a result of what I did,
I change my grin to a look of confusion and worry,
Time to single out the next victim of my furry.

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  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Indeed it did work...very well I would say. You've got quite a talent for sounding like a malicious, wicked, killer...I wouldn't have thought you were actually psychotic...but you entered the mind of a killer well...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    yea it worked it sounds really evil ive had those feelings were i just want to go crazy on someone n kill but i hold back im not ccrazy just really short tempered

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Yes it worked !!!
    I loves it just loved it
    keep it up
    I love how you write is so awesome
    I love how this poem could paint a picture in my head .
    April

  • 18 years ago

    by Meagan

    good job yeah you got ur evil poem down pat lol

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    yes i worked!!!!! cool poem some poems let yea wander but this kept me glued to the screen.....5 x)