Good And Evil

by NK   Apr 17, 2005


Good and evil, who thought these names?
For this one person, they make claims
That there is one truly better side
And the other people, they must hide

Is good evil, is evil good?
Should things be the way they should
Is there truly a better path
Then to keep clean and take a bath

Or is it just a thing of choice
Which one has the stronger voice?
Or is it just a thing of shame
To follow someone else’s name

I think we need to make a mind
Of which is mean and which is kind
Who to follow? That’s up to you
It’s the same difference between red and blue

Good and evil do not exist
Its just a voice has caused a twist
There is no truly one good side
Just different rules, to which abide

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow, I loved the flow of this poem and
    I completely agree with it.
    I especially liked the way you wrote the second stanza.
    just to let you know. in the forth line of the second stanza, It was "than" not "then".
    may you be happy,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    awesome poem, but i do have a few suggestions. One, i think you tried a little to hard to rhyme this one, it wasn't as smooth as it could have been. The second is a grammatical error. The last stanza, third line, I think you meant not, instead of no. Take care, I hope to read more soon.

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    loved this poem(and the rest iv read) youv got a lot of talent.......xxxleexxx*mwah*

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    loved this poem(and the rest iv read) youv got a lot of talent.......xxxleexxx*mwah*

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