Older Men Pt.1

by Fireflower   Apr 22, 2005


Why did it have to be you,
That i would think my love is true?
I know it's plain for me to see,
That you're 17 years older than me.

When i compare you to boys my own age,
I feel tied down, and locked in a cage.
Because they're so childish and immature.
It's you i need, my emotions are sure.

I know society would not agree,
For us to be together, you and me.
And even worse, you're the son of a preacher.
And it's too bad you're my honors english teacher.

You're funny, smart and real.
I personally don't see what's the big deal.
I would give you all my love forever.
It's just too bad we can never be together.

I look at you, and you look at me.
I'm longing for you, can't you see?
Maybe you're longing for me
It's just too bad we can never be an item, you and me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    excellent poem, very well written. As most everyone else, I can definately relate to this. take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    aww this poem makes me sad....Great write..maybe one day right? <3333

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This is a good poem, yet I feel that the rhymes were much too forced...

    Some of them seemed to only be there in order to make the whole poem rhyme...

    Very important thought behind it, though, and it makes you think...

    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    ***** Stars... very good!! //September

  • 18 years ago

    by chloe

    nice poem... i can totally rel8.. older men are so much better! its unfair that boys mature slower than girls do