Sunset Painting

by Fireflower   Jun 15, 2006


*ya so my english teacher gave me an 83 on this descriptive poem about the sun and the sunset. We had to compare the sunset to something.. so, read on..

The suns rays are like a river,
Strong, steady and swift.
Giving life to all
And giving a new strength.
Then it slowly works its way
into a steady, sure descent.
Works its way down
Like a waterfall
Beautiful for just a moment
Until it continues its journey downstream
To light the rest of the world.

*so, what grade did it really deserve? be honest now ya'hear??

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