Great poem! I know how it is to love someone like a sibling, when they aren't really related to you. (See my poems "My Brother" and "An Arm Around My Shoulder" for more details.) But anyway, great job. 5/5
aww..this was very good:)...i really loveed it..and i'm so sorry that you two never get to talk anymore because you're so busy....that really sucks a lot...hang in there, someday you'll talk like you used ot!! i promise~ great job as always 5/5~
take care, love ya~
Oh Amit, you do have a beautiful heart. She is very lucky to have you as a brother (whether blood related or not). This is a very beautiful way to tell her how much you love, appreciate and care about her. Wonderful job. 5/5
Amit, this is a very lovely and beautiful poem...so sweet!!! This is just how I feel about my brother and from the beginning to the end, I thought about him....so thank you for sharing with all of us who reads this!!! Glad you met this girl, your sister!!!
I know exactly what you are saying. It's definetly a 5/5. I have a friend that is like a sister to me too... check out my poem Letting You Go. it really hurts to let them go or not talk to them for a long time. But anyways, good job and keep up the good work!
Wow!! I know exactly how you feel..I share that same feeling...I know it hurts...This poem was wonderfully described! You showed your emotions really well...I wish the two of you luck and jhope you are soon able to talk....5/5
wow i loved this poem, i know exactly what you mean. i have no real sister either but i met this girl a year or so ago and we developed this bro-sis relationship and i would happily do anythign for her. and i havent talked to her so much recently and i am trying to make sure i dont lose her. stay strong mate