Mirror Of Pain

by Fierce   Apr 25, 2005


Feeling lost feeling hurt
Lowest of low, spread across the dirt
Nothing seems right, it's always so wrong
You try so hard, but you don't seem to belong

Lost in a world where no one seems to care
When you're so afraid; you soul you couldn't possibly bare
So brought down by all your pain
You think by your death, many will gain

Quietly, you know for sure
You press down the knife, the pain you ignore
So senseless you lay feeling the pressure gone
No one around you fell so torn

We stare desperately into the mirror
To see one tiny, soulless tear
Screaming so hard, cause now everyone can see
The girl in the reflection is really me

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  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Thats awesome hun xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    LOVE THIS POEM.... WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT. LOL
    KEEP IT UP

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i agree with above.. this poem is great! all the words flowed perfectly and there was not one thing i didnt like! excellent job! keep it up! :) take care

  • 19 years ago

    by LuRvEKiTTeN

    hey thats great!i wrote a poem like that once.everything about it is clear and concise,its lkike all your words roll together!great xxx