My Secret Crush~Not much a secret anymore!

by ღ Christina ღ   Apr 26, 2005


I have a secret crush
Every time he talks to me, I start to blush

My crush doesn’t like me
So I know we can never be

But I don’t think I can ever give him up
So I try to look pretty for him with a lot of makeup

He likes one of my friends who says nobody likes her at all
But there are so many people
That if I would stack them it would be very tall

I have a secret crush but its not much of a secret anymore
And I know if I told him he would leave and close the door

~This poem I wrote a long time ago! That’s probably why it sounds really bad! But I would really appreciate comments on how to make it sound better!

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Still a Good Poem 5\5

  • 19 years ago

    by kirsty

    good tip Amit, christina try to keep the poem on a rhyme scheme like a/b a/b ectera, and keep the syllables similar
    good otherwis though

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice write, Christina... try to be more organized when it comes the length of each line... keep writing and keep smiling...
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit.

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