Take these dreams away

by Poetically Speaking   Apr 27, 2005


*another song*

There is this part of me
It scratches and screams to be let free
Deep in my devotion it pleas
someone take these dreams from me
take this pain and leave
take it away

These figures stand tall
memories from my past
the voice echoes the words
death wont last

wake me
I don’t want this
wake me

These hollowed pieces just don’t seem to fit
I try to make them work
But it eats away at me the harder it gets
My picture of you hides deep inside
Each time I remember your voice
My heart cries
That plastic face you portray
Those pure lips of silk I prey
I've been immortalized in those crystal eyes
You run through my veins
You're cold as ice

wake me
I dont want this
wake me
wake me
I dont want this
wake me

There is a hate that burns within
The blackest place I have ever been
What have I become?
In this place I live
What has happened to me?
My dearest friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by shingler

    I liked it very much....i'll read more of yer work later!

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    Your writing is captivating. I love it! I am going to add you to my favourites because i feel you truly deserve to be there. Another excellent write and a brilliant song.

    -ellie

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    i thought this one was good, but not the best. thank you so much for your criticism on my poem 'Unidentified Heart'. thanks for the site and your comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    nice i love it
    it's not like the other songs on here
    it's not repetitive

  • 18 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    this is beautiful, nice job

    Unloved ♥