Self Inflicted

by Kaitlin Kristina   May 4, 2005


The sculpture I face.

Alas, it’s perfect.

Its lines are chiseled of my dreams,

Its lips are cast of the sweetest words,

And its eyes are the ones that watch me over.

Alas, it’s perfect. Yet I walk away.

I know no better; yet you gave me the World.

Your hands, which once rimmed my curves-

Now cold, personified in stone. This picturesque

Lonely statue.

Alas, stands in front of me. In agonizing perfection.

I skim along each line and carved bend, looking for

Imperfections. Yet there are none.

You stand, drawing me nearer.

You would hold me if I asked.

Stone, glossed to a reflective state. I see my face cast against it.

I gaze, lost in my own blue eyes, caught in the maze

Of their own dark shadows.

I see the imperfection.

Reflected on you, my love, and I walk away.

I know no better.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Wow! Terrific poem Very deep. I loved it. It was sad too. Great job:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©


    "I skim along each line and carved bend, looking for

    Imperfections. Yet there are none."

    Those few lines really caught me...and made me read the poem quite a few times. A very intriguing poem I must say. It definitly catches the attention of the reader. Also,

    "You would hold me if I asked."

    Wow, that fits the picture I got of this poem so well. Wonderful. This poem was very enjoyable and well written, keep writing.
    Dorotea

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    It was all intentional, thank you for the feedback :)

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