What Happened To Us?

by Renee   May 8, 2005


What happened to those days
when I could forget all my pain
I'd look in your eyes
and realize
theres so much more to gain
you took me by the hand
damn it felt so good
but you dont know
how much it hurt when you let go

and now you'll see
how much you hurt me
and how painful love can be

wish I could slit your throat
with these words I wrote
and all the promises you broke

so what if I cared?
this heart wont work and can't be repaired
your no longer a part of me
even though I miss you terribly

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nanita

    i think that it was really good. i liked it. it reminds me of my first love but then he stopped talkin to me and that was it

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Honest and very intersting. Keep writing.

    xxx

  • wow that was so emotional and heartfelt i loved all of it! very poetic. the rhyme and structure was great!
    >>5/5<<
    *bec* xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    i like it <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Very deep...and very good.