by ღ Christina ღ May 8, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
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I’m very sad it’s over |
by ~*Ley*~
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pretty good not your best. it was good at first but disconnected a bit towards the end. |
by NoPatience
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awww. that was sweet at the end and was very tru and real 5/5 |
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great, and i know i say you shouldn't listen to others but i also do but if you loved him it could have overcome anything but good poem4* |
by lisa marie
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that was pretty good considering that you're young. you've got a lot of talent. |
by **Just Her**
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this is so sad.... I do like your writing but I think you should try to find different words for words like "sad" and what not, it will really bring out your poems. |