Piccture of Life

by Austin   May 8, 2005


Slipping ever so slowly
The world jsut draws me in
I'm not good enough for color
So I have a silhouette
Sketched in blakc and white
So no you think I'm just a picture
A piece of art to look at all day
But I'm not a picture
And I can't wait forever
Make up your mind
It's now or never
Either leave me or love me
There is no in between
Because in the picture of life
You can't dream flasehood
Only reality

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I loved this one! It was so brilliant. My favorite part was
    A piece of art to look at all day
    But I'm not a picture
    And I can't wait forever
    Make up your mind
    It's now or never

    Those feelings are so real. You really do make your poems worth the while to read. That was definately a 5.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    wow, I really enjoyed this one.
    thanks for sharing it.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I liked It, good poem. One thing you need to fix is your typos.

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    Realize that you must not let yourself be the picture. If you feel confined... MOVE. It is your only escape. Read some of my work if you find the time.

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    This is a really good poem! Short and to the point! I liked it a lot!
    Love alwayz....
    Haily

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