by Lauren   May 11, 2005

I'm a ragdoll
Torn apart at the seams
Stitches where I've been cut
Bruised by broken dreams

Incisions in my body
The smile sewn is fake
Pins are pushed into my skin
While I'm still awake

Needles pierce entirely
Through my fabricated existence
I tried and I will try again
To gain someone's forgiveness

Still, I am a ragdoll
Bruised by broken dreams
Needles in my body
Stitched up at the seams


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  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellent poem, very descriptive with a lot of emotions inside. I like the imagery that you created, very unique.
    Keep up
    5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Omg. that is so beautiful. i really love this poem. i just dont know how to explain it...its just. omg...amazing. this is just simple...wow. thats all i can say. wow...if i could, i would give this 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5 thats how good it is.

  • 15 years ago

    by Melissa

    Now that is an excellent poem! Very clever!

  • 15 years ago

    by Leanne

    Wow gr8 poem so powerful x x x

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    Why thank you!!!