=This is a poem that I wrote a week ago and I hate it a lot but i was just curious to see how it would get rated! = I know it's very bad and kind of short but I would appreciate any comments on how I can improve this poem! = ♥ =
I love you so much and I'm glad your mine
People think your hot and just so fine
They all say I'm Lucky to have a guy like you
And trust me baby, I agree with that too
You helped me get things off my mind
You made my life easier and that was what I was trying to find
I don't know how long we will last
But I hope it's forever because being with you it is a blast!
I love you so much and I know you love me too
Thanks for caring and always being true ♥