I HOPE YOU DIE!!!

by Deathcanwait   May 12, 2005


I HOPE YOU DIE!!

I hope you feel my pain,
The seething within my chest.
I hope you fall and break your neck,
And fail all your tests.

I hope you cry yourself to sleep,
And slit your vial wrist.
I hope you drown in burning oil,
From me you won’t be missed.

I hope you get shot in the heart,
Causing loads of pain.
I hope you end up just like me,
A lion that’s been slain.

I hope you get knocked down,
Or run over by a train.
I hope you break your stupid spine,
And get left out in the rain.

I hope you suffer a painful fall,
And break every bone inside.
I hope you get washed out my life,
By a freak turn in the tide.

I hope you cry a thousand tears,
And drown in your own blood.
I hope you get trampled by a horse,
And choke on all the mud.

I hope you’re cursed by him above,
But that would be too kind.
I hope you get traumatised,
And messed up in the mind.

I hope you jump off your house,
And crash right to the ground.
Falling on your pathetic head,
And your body’s never found.

I hope you die a horrid death,
And hang from a fallen tree.
You deserve all of this pain,
For what you did to me.

M.H.
12/05/05

Copyright © 2005 M.H.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Cate Rock

    This is a very...original poem...scares the he'll outta me! But it's great. Yet the fact it's choppy from a simple choke to falling off a house landing on her (or his) head seems to washy...if you want intense pain bring it. Haha...but no I think you coulda added more personal detail yet it's still wonderful 5+

  • 16 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    This poem is great...know how ya feel

    Ali~

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a really strong poem.. your a really great writer.. keep it up =]P

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Thats really good. super sad but really good :D

  • 17 years ago

    by StArRiEeYeZ

    Just wanted to say that this is a great poem and i have a very strong connection.. keep up the good work and effort :)

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