Comments : The Tragic End

  • 15 years ago

    by EoB

    Very sad and quite well written. You manage to put alot of emotion in this piece of poetry...not funny though, considering the circumstances.

    Nice flow, and nice rhyming...

    I'll read a few more of you

  • 15 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That's so sad! It was very well written! It was sure worth the read! I am sure you miss her dearly! Take Care! 5/5 Brooke~

  • 15 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Beautiful poem, so sorry for your loss. I hope your friend realised what a good friend she had in you.
    Take care always,
    - Shell.

  • 15 years ago

    by cherry

    omg thats so sad im so sorry i know what its like to miss someone you loved and someone that has just died and everything that happend to me with my grandmother and best friend so if you ever need to tlk im a great listener and can help love always god bless

  • Absolutely Loved It!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    we had the same birthday, your friend and i...and she sounds just like one of my friends...

  • 15 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    This is so sad! i have attempted suicide and my best friend has told me if i go she is coming with me. Im sure that it is her that is keeping me alive. I wrote a poem about it, please readit and comment it is called
    a poem 2 a friend.

  • 15 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    omg that was soo sad it almost had me in tears! im really sorry about your friend bt im glad u didnt succeed in suicide or you never no sum1 mite have been writing a similar poem about u xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Elissa

    That is really sad. I'm so sorry that this happened to you.
    love always,
    Elissa

  • 15 years ago

    by steve

    this poem is beautiful, Im sorry you lost your friend, take comfort in knowing she watches you still and that she always will be there all you gotta do is look up.....great job

  • 15 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    What can I say? It was really awesome. It was well written and it flows very well. It was so sad and true emotions show!! Im sorry you lost your friend ='( Be strong!!! Great work!!! 5/5 =)

  • 15 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Oh My God... WOW. This poem is fantastic! I really don't know what to say. I am so sorry you lost your friend. This poem is so amazing..

    Beautiful scars never leave her arm
    Reminding her that she’ll always self-harm

    I like that part. Wow. Keep this up hun.

    Love much,
    Tiff

  • 15 years ago

    by lilhippyangel

    That poems is very good and very true...keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by lilhippyangel

    That poems is very good and very true...keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very stunning poem with a sad but powerful messsage, stay strong sweetheart

  • 14 years ago

    by Julie

    Hey well i really loved ur poem because i know just how u feel my friend did the same thing and i just wish she didnt she was the best thing in my life at that time and ever sence i have been depressed

  • 14 years ago

    by Julie

    Hey well i really loved ur poem because i know just how u feel my friend did the same thing and i just wish she didnt she was the best thing in my life at that time and ever sence i have been depressed

  • 14 years ago

    by Julie

    Hey well i really loved ur poem because i know just how u feel my friend did the same thing and i just wish she didnt she was the best thing in my life at that time and ever sence i have been depressed

  • 14 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    wow that was really shocking made me relize everyday god gives us is a gift

  • 14 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    this poem is so sad. My finacee took his life in october and left me with his daughter. I'm still not over it and don't know if i ever will be. I'm so sorry for your loss. Your poem, once again, is amazing. I love your work its so well written and as i said before filled with passion.