Brused and broken ( i already submitted this one)

by ~*Nicki*~   May 16, 2005


I\'m bruised and broken
from all those bumpy roads i took
I\'m all cut up
from everything i have to go through
what have i ever done
what have i done to deserve this
cuts to scars
the only way i know how to relive myself
i learn to love one day
the next day that education gets stomped on
no more love,confidence in myself
no one cares
about me, how i feel
the only thing that matters is if they get what they want
what they want is the only thing that matters
they don\'t care about risking the friendship
about all the love and good times
what it all comes down to
CUTS TO SCARS
it leaves me bruised and broken

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  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a great poem i am glad u enjoyed my poem destruction thank u for your comment on it. Your comment helps me out alot cause I had people read this poem and complain about it like u said i guess u have to been there to get it.

  • 18 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    great poem! i have learnt not to get 2 close to anyone after i was used by a guy. when it is boiling hot i still cannot take off my jumper or even roll up my sleeves because of all the scars. i then make myself sick from being overheated. please read my poems! i have some more on. and if u do can u please leave a comment! i love reading them and seeing what people think. luv steph xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    I like this...sounds familiar do you like NFG? sounds like it was inspired by them...very good but very sad...stay strong
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    Great poem! I've felt that way myself, like the blade is all i've got. thanx for the comment and keep writin that good stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Nicki*~

    Thanks for the comment, i really appreciate it very much.