My Suicide Part 2

by Christine   May 20, 2005


Would you cry if I left
Would you try to stop me
Would you even notice I was gone
You act like I’m invisible

My suicide
How I wish I could
My suicide
It sounds so sweet
Death
What a lovely thought

This would scare you
To see what I truly want
Yes, I need to die
To leave this life
God Almighty, take me please
This has to be my time

I cut so deep because of you
Blood stains the carpet
There is so much
Sweet, sweet blood
Must cut deeper
There isn’t enough
I’m not scared
I don’t feel pain
I’m numb; so numb

You thought I’d stop for you
But you made me cut deeper and deeper
Still my soul cries for more
Blood shed for you
But you aren’t satisfied
You never will be
Not until I disappear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    That was even better than part one! The thing I really liked about this, is that it wasn't exactly the same style as part one. It had a different feeling.. more angry than sad, and the flow changed a bit. very nice,
    5/5 from me : )
    xox
    Robin

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    both parts are gud.. lykd em all.. keep up the gud work
    take care
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Cara McTired

    oh... poor you...
    (checked out your other poems... you'll get an award in no time!)

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