by Arora May 23, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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When I see you with her |
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Good poem! i gave you a 5 because i can understand what you went through. |
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I loved it good job! Keep it up |
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poems that dont rhyme dont go down to well but good flow and keep at it, youll only improve |
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excellent poem 5 |
by M J U
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It seems all 3 writings are related. Hopefully they will all be resolved. I wonder what the last line, "stop loving me the day I met you?" Did all of this occur in just one day or is it over time? |