It's not that long...

by Alyssa   May 31, 2005

They took him right there
without any warning
maybe he was wrong
but you shouldn't take away his favorite song
you must not have a heart
did you from the start
how is this going to help
it's not you only thought about yourself
maybe you think this is right
you must be blind without sight
the love is strong he knows the wrong
so many are waiting for him to be free
can't you just see
why did you have to put him behind bars
unable to see the night stars
you might not realize
but people do have feelings
all i ask is to set him free this year
for his girlfriend and his little girls
is that enough for you
after all this stuff we have all been put through
until then we will keep waiting....


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  • 17 years ago

    by JaSoNs LiL bAbY

    Hey thanks for commenting on my poem. i really like your poem it was very well written. it was very sad but it was nice and i liked it well done keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess 69

    Nice job ive never been able to write a poem like that!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JaSoNs LiL bAbY

    Great poem i liked it alot and thanx heaps for commenting on my poem


  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    You did real good on this poem it is excellent. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynz

    This poem is good, but I want to know MORE! It makes me curious, and it would be cool if you wrote a follow up to it or something...that would be really awesome
    Love always,

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