by Alyssa   Jun 17, 2005

standing in the middle of fear
seconds from death
save me my dear
can't even take a breath
shedding a tear
maybe it was because of meth
no one is near
you came too soon death
now we cheer
death we not fear
Hope is near...


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  • 18 years ago

    by brooke

    great job, i really liked it short an sweet. well i hope to see more of your awesome poems keep up the writing

    love brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynz

    keep writing...it was good, Rhyming worked. I'm excited to read more of your work...WRITE, write- W-R-I-T-E!
    Love always,

  • 18 years ago

    by shae r

    hey great job on this one..it was very different which i think gives it something extra <5

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    hey that was SOOOOOO KEWL!!!!! not very long but who says length matters? :P 5/5 it's gr8.....thanx for the comment on my poem, i really appreciate it! Peace and Take Care, //ari\\

    P.s.- MATCHBOX20 RULEZ. xP

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    It was short, but I liked it. It was a good poem, nicely written. Good job!
    Keep it up and thx for the comment*hugs*


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