Sorrows Whisper

by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©   Jun 9, 2005

Breathlessly She Lay
The Caramel Sun Sucked Her Pores
She Became Tan
As The Beach Remained Her Floor

The Clouds Whispered The Rain
a Down Pour Drove a Splash
And Collided With The Waves
She Cooled Off Now At Last

Paralyzed In Pain
She Didn't Think To Move
After Being Abused
The Sorrow Sunk To Sooth

a Teenage Girl
Crying Frozen Tears Of Glass
Beaten And Bruised
Deserted By Her Dad

Staring At The Pastels
Vacating Among The Sky
As The Sun Was Set
a Tear Over-took Her Eye

Daddy Beats Her Plenty
But This Time She Was Tainted
She Dreamed Of Stars
After The Abuse Had Left Her Fainted

She Awoke In Heaven
Death Had Sought To Kiss Her
As She Cuddled Amongst
Her Sorrows Final Whisper


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  • 13 years ago

    by Sasha

    Aw. that was so sad. i thought it was gonna be about a ocean and thats it but it relaly had a lot of meaning, you are a great writter

  • 13 years ago

    by xXits meXx

    Great poem..i almost cryd..great imagery.. i could almost see everything as u wrote it!! 5/5


  • 13 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Wow what a poem, the imagry combined with the hurt of abuse, very nicely done images were done perfect it was like I was there the entire time.

  • 13 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Beautiful poem ...... i could feel the emotion ..... well penned ..... 5/5

    keep it the great writting


  • 14 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Now this poem is ABSLUETLY BREATH-TAKING! i mean it really rocks!! i luuved it! it had a deep meaning to it...
    take care
    haya 3gab =]