Fake

by Chad   Jun 12, 2005


I put on a smile.
But that is not my style.
You think they are real.
All they do is hide what I feel.

Wish for you not to see what is in my heart.
Portrayed in the simplest forms of art.
I know it not to be true.
What shall I do?

Hiding behind all my lies.
Will it be better if someone dies?
All the thoughs in my head.
It will be better when I am dead.

It is all fake.
When will I wake?
Looking at me nothing is true.
So get a clue.

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  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    this one was expressive. not one of my favorites of yours. maybe it was the flow? I still thought it was very good as are all your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    i can definitely relate to this one. great job w/the rhyming... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    you express your thoughts wonderfully
    chad. 5/5
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    I liked most of it, besides the last line in the last stanza.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    work a bit on it and it will be a master peice...i dont know whats wrong just dosnt go completly right....still it is a good poem
    well done

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