Falling.

by InMyWorld   Jun 13, 2005


Too tired to think
too lost to be found
too lonely to sleep
please help me, catch me before i hit the ground

this all happened because
i was too afraid to say
what i needed to say and now I'm

falling, falling so fast
almost too fast to be caught
stuck in a whirlwind of emotions
not caring at all anymore
anymore, anymore

why do things like this happen,
did i bring it upon myself
was it my fate
time to rethink decisions

and now I'm too far gone
isolated, separated
pushed aside, deliberately, obviously
not meaning to be
i lost you, all because of me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow.. alot of emotion in that one! But i reallie liked it alot esp. the begning it had a very nice flow to it and a good message. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    I like the way this doesn't have a continuous rhythm. It fits in with the emotion of the poem. Good work.xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    needs a little work, but its good. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    good poem, i think it need to flow a little better.. and this verse is kind of out of place

    this all happened because
    i was too afraid to say
    what i needed to say and now I'm