by InMyWorld Jun 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Too tired to think |
by Britney
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Wow.. alot of emotion in that one! But i reallie liked it alot esp. the begning it had a very nice flow to it and a good message. great job. |
by Tiny Reader
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I like the way this doesn't have a continuous rhythm. It fits in with the emotion of the poem. Good work.xxx |
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needs a little work, but its good. keep writing |
by LAST RONIN
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good poem, i think it need to flow a little better.. and this verse is kind of out of place |