Wondering

by InMyWorld   Jun 13, 2005


I see it in your eyes
that look of longing
every time you're with me
i know what you're thinking
you wish i was her
and i can't bear it

do you know how it feels?

now I'm wondering, if
it was her that had felt the same
would she be in your arms
right now
if it was both
who would you have picked
cause now I'm thinking
you got the wrong girl

when i talk to you, you're disconnected
i lend a helping hand and you brag about hers
if she'd felt the same and i hadn't
would you have waited for me
or gone with her

i try and be what you want
to be perfect in your eyes
but every time i look at you
i see her reflection
staring back at me

i feel like a substitute
and that when she comes running to you
I'll be gone without a trace
without a tear in your eye
from all the guilt you should be feeling
and all the lies you've told to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Loved the last stanza of this poem! It was very sad and full of true emotions! I can relate to this poem! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow.. awesome poem. It would drive me nuts if I knew that my man wanted someone else.. But i would still love him.. I know because i have been in the situation before. Anyways great job it had a nice flow and i loved the imagery. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    that was so sad. it all fit together well...nice write. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Good job Sara, my favorite part was --

    'i try and be what you want
    to be perfect in your eyes
    but every time i look at you
    i see her reflection
    staring back at me'

    Yeah hun, I know how you feel! Overall though, this poem was great.

    Take care,
    - Shell.

    Thanks for the comments btw, it means alot to me :-D

  • 18 years ago

    by Stef

    Really, really like this one. It was extremely well done and...wow. I think we've all been there before. Love the first 2 stanzas, great job. 5/5 for sure.
    <3 Stef

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