The Last Leaf

by Sourav   Jun 17, 2005


Love, how beautiful you look
When you cry
My eyes look so pretty
When tears get dry

I look so handsome
When I am all alone
My conscience looks so clear
When it remains on its own

You look so gorgeous
When you remove all your make-ups
I understand you so well
When you go erratic & I've nothing to discuss

God, you look so great
When a wretched dies for a bread
Lord, you look so strong
When a harlot does her trade

Friend, you look so loyal
When you leave me on the mid-street
Foe, you look so true
When you lie but never retreat

Life, how beautiful you look
When the death is near by
I've waited long for this moment
And now it is time for the last sigh.

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  • 13 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Incredible

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi again,
    lovely!!!!!!!!! thats all i can say for this.

  • 18 years ago

    by SplitSided

    Hey partner...literally were partners..it was good..well ok it was fair not my style but yea it has potential and i think you can take it somewhere...i'd work on a better rhyme scheme..but that's jus me..keep em comin...you'll get better...anyway..check mine out so we can say we did this thing...aight..hit me back..peace

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Wooooooowwwwwww, that's pretty deep, it's very emotional, and very good, i like your work very much, you keep it up too! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    U strike agen!! i admire ur words and the power in them... i jus dunno wat the title has to do with these words of the poem.. i mean.. u cud call it last sigh, or add a staza or smth and include the last leaf.. but i understand ur title and wat u meant in the poem.. and it not necessary that ur title be included in ur poem.. i was jus thinkin..
    anywayz.. that was amazing
    keep it up

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