Pain Redeemed To Be

by Sarah Ann   Jun 21, 2005


They are all blind inside their own mind
Knowing its wrong, still remaining strong
Cutting away fear screams for all to hear
Seeing beyond fate before it becomes late
But all they see is pain redeemed to be

Lost inside myself, stuck with no one else
In a world of pain, nothing feels the same
The world is spinning, and I’m not winning
My heart is beating fast, this will never last
Going all around, buried far under ground

Slipping away in hell, quickly my heart fell
I can’t jump the fence, it isn’t making sense
As mother is still chasing, my sweat is racing
Stabbing me in the back, everything is black
Knowing it as I need, quickly then I bleed

Screaming in fears, crying with bloody tears
Dripping with the rain, the killer goes insane
Life runs on a screen, I’m stuck in between
Alone in this land, no one can grasp my hand
With no one to lean on, slowly I will be gone

It was sort of a quick dream I had that didnt make sense...Sorry if the internal rhyme isn't good...There is always room for improvement.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    thanks xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thank you everyone. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    A poem that truly deserves to be called "dark." This was incredible. I felt like I was in the dream as well. You portrayed the atmosphere to the T. Wonderful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    darkly written...i have weird nightmares similar to this. this is a great poem. i am just loving all of your poems i have read so far. =)

    5.5

    love and hugs