It Seems

by Chris   Jun 22, 2005


It seems the pain
has become unbearable
It seems happiness
is quite incapable

It seems I can still feel
my heart, falling apart
It seems my life
could use a new start

I could use a laugh
or a smile on my face
Happiness could come with
some time away from this place

It seems I've made mistake
in the past year
But tonight's the last night
you'll see me shed a tear

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    a bit of inconsistancy.. with the 3rd verse not having the words "It seems"
    thats the only thing I can say.. so yea.. good job man

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I like it. You have the "short but sweet" thing down. Good word choice in there. Heartfelt.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

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