Haunting Love

by Victoria   Jun 23, 2005


Please answer my call
Take notice of me
Without you I feel so small
Everything is unclear that I see

Your face is haunting me in my dreams
Please ease the pain
As nothing now is what it seems
You always appear again and again

What have I done?
You seem to move uneasy when I’m there
My feelings now are far spun
There is no imagination left to spare

Now at night I pray
That soon your face will fade away.

*This is one of my old poems and not my best but thanks for reading

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  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    T0uchinG lines. very wel| written!!
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    *x00o00x*

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    hey nice job keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    Hey, thanks a heap for comenting on my poem, it means a lot. This may not be your best, but it is still very good! Keep up the great work, have fun.
    Bye Bye
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is so so sad, good write.

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    amazing poem! i love the emotions that are so real and you have written this just wonderfully and i love it!!

    5.5

    love and hugs

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