World so cold

by Elynnka   Jun 23, 2005


Many thousand miles away
In a place where the light slowly fades,
Where lands are covered-up with graves
Live the ones that cry each day.

All the ones that use to fight
The ones that never shed a tear
And were never overwhelmed by fear,
Are now dead, erased by death’s scythe.

The world has changed becoming worse,
No more bliss to embrace our heart
We’re left alone to face the dark,
We fight in vain against this curse.

*** Hmm... I see you don't like this poem so much... maybe I should stop writing since my rating started to drop... ***

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    thts reli good keep it up plx comment and vote on some of mine i cud reli relate to it i liked the emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    this is a good poem I dont see why it would drop. i liketh it!

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    this poem is great good job. If u can will you comment on my poems thx.