Death of Another

by jarrod   Oct 23, 2003


My mind is seething
she rolls on by
my heart is bleeding
please let me try.

My hands are numbing
her body is cold
i hear her humming
im still not sold.

I begin to shake
they tell me no
a sudden earth quake
they say i must go

Please let me try!
Together at last!
We had no goodbye!
My love has passed!!!

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  • 13 years ago

    by beav

    So tragic. really nice. i felt the helplessness. good descriptions of the physical manifestations of emotions experienced. so much sadness and feeling in only a few lines. awesome piece. 5! -beav

  • 16 years ago

    by Hayli

    wowzers. I love how it's so simple yet says alot. Never stop writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    woh that was awesome keep writing love to read more. luv heather

  • 16 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Hey Jarrod, i love this poem, its brilliant, you are a gifted poet. Maybe you should stick to that and leave the hacking to me! lol