A Rose

by ღ*KiM*ღ   Jun 27, 2005


A rose; full of beauty
Yet so full of harm
It's delicate heart
Is it's one true charm

The thorns are decieving
They're not meant to hurt
They protect the true meaning
To keep it alert

The petals; attraction
They act as a mask
Covering intentions
The petals one task.

*unfinished*

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  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    I really like what you have so far. I love how you explain that the thorns aren't there to intentionally hurt. I hope you finish it soon. Keep up the good work and take care.
    ><> Kiesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh that has so much potential ....that could be turned into a great piece. FINISH it Kim!!! LoL .....I loved it! I'll be looking for the finished product! So get on it!! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    Obviously unfinished, but with alot of potential...These four lines, alone, made me want to read the rest, whenever you finish it..

    let me know

    peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    good so far! can't wait to read the rest!

  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    a really good start. once its finished it'll be even more amazing. 5/5. short n sweet x

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